Monday, 9 December 2013

2.1 Evaluation


This is my evaluation of my 2.1 Radio advert for Metro Radio
 
When I got asked to write a radio advert to promote Gateshead College, the first thing that I researched was the different types of courses that Gateshead College offer and what is the unique selling point of the college. I researched this on the Gateshead College website first where I found the numerous of courses that they had to offer and then I found there unique selling point which is :

Gateshead College is strong , creative and reliable .’

I made sure I added this in my advert as it was key to promoting the college. I decided for the actors in the advert to have Geordie accents as the advert will be broadcasted on metro radio which is the number one radio in the north east and they base the radio on having a great local relationship , so therefore having the actors with a Geordie accent follows the style of the radio. When I finished my first draft one of my peers in my class read through it, the feedback I got was that I didn’t need to change the layout or the style and that it was good for my final draft.

My radio advert script follows the conventional layout of a radio script, it follows this style by the actor’s names in capitals and underlined and I also used phonetic spelling so the script is easy to read and broadcast. I based my layout on a Metro Radio advert script.

I think that my final radio advert was very successful as I ticked all the boxes for the assignment. I found that keeping the advert to 30 seconds was the hardest part as I had to fit in all the key information. After writing it out a few times I found i had the right information in and all the key parts to make a good radio advert.

What I learnt from this assignment was that radio adverts are only broadcasted for a small amount of time and that to fit in all the information is difficult. Next time I would like my advert to have more humour as I felt like I hadn’t achieved that.

3.2 Adapted News Report draft


We had to adapt a news report for children ages 6-11 years old. This is my first draft.
 
Hey guys have you ever wondered what you will be doing when you are 17 or 18? Well let me tell you !

There is a new rule in England that means that you have to be in education until you are 18 years old. The important people who are in-charge of the UK, think that this will be a great idea, as if you stay in education until you are 18 you will have a better chance of getting that dream job that you have always wished for, if it is being a pop star or an astronaut!

When you reach the age of 16 there are so many options for you , you can study one subject that really interests you , this is a diploma , you can do academic subjects which are called A levels, if you know what job you want to do you can learn about it more with a vocational qualification  and there are a lot more options for you to choose. You can find more information on our website!

3.1 Planning a modern fairy tale


This is the plan for my modern fairy tale


Snow white
A young beautiful girl gets led astray by jealous individuals who try and ruin her beauty with the influence of drugs and alcohol.
 


 

 
 
Cinderella
Cinderella was an orphan and had been fostered by a very wealthy family in London.
This story is going to be about child abuse and how children should approach help if they are being abused.


 
Cinderella

Characters

Cinderella : Angelina

Ugly Sister 1: Cherry

Ugly Sister 2: Kerry

Step Mother: Liz

Fairy Godmother:  Black cab taxi man

 

Story line

Angelina gets fostered by a wealthy family , who abuse her into cleaning their house. The story will go along the lines of how people suffer abuse at home and how they should voice their pain.