Monday, 25 November 2013

2.2 NEWS EVALUATION


Evaluation

The process I went through to create my radio news broadcast was to begin with , I researched the most current news on websites such as : www.bbc.co.uk/news and www.theguardian.co.uk . On these websites I picked out the most current news and to me what I thought was the most important. I picked an even amount of sport, business , political , culture and celebrity news so that my news broadcast had a wide range of variety which will suit my target audience of 16-25. The language within the script isn’t too technical so the younger ages of the listeners can relate to these articles.    
When I was constructing my first draft I based the layout on an example I had from Radio 1 Newsbeat script, this example is a conventional news script which most news broadcasters follow. On the script I noticed that they count how many seconds each news broadcast is and where you had to write down the duration. To make sure that my news script reflects my target audience I kept the news broadcasts relatively short, as younger listeners don’t normally like listening to too much talking on the radio.  When I thought I had finished my first draft, someone in my class looked over it and gave me some feedback. This is where I realised that I hadn’t written enough script for the duration to be near five minutes, I also hadn’t included any jingles or music beds which was rather important to keep my target audience interested in the news as music in the background keeps listeners focused to what news is being broadcasted, I also I hadn’t included audio notes. In order to improve my radio news script I researched how to include audio notes and music beds within my script, I found another example of a newsbeat broadcast script and followed the same layout. I found a few more news stories from my news research and added in these stories to extend my script.
To summarise my overall learning from this assignment I was surprised how simple a radio news script is, what I found difficult was making sure my news broadcast related to the right target audience. This is where I found out that adding in a music bed helped to keep the audience’s attention and also keeping the news broadcasts short but informative. What I should have done better is researched more radio news scripts as this would of helped me get the best news script to follow and therefore I wouldn’t of had to make so many changes to my first draft. From this assignment I have learnt that I should do a lot more research to improve my final draft.

FINAL DRAFT 2.2 NEWS REPORT


Final Draft News Report

Here is my final draft of my news report for Radio 1 Newsbeat

Radio 1 Newsbeat

NEWSBEAT JINGLE THROUGHOUT AS MUSIC BED

11/11/13

 

Top story this morning, Typhoon Haiyan hit the Philippines on the 8th of November.  Authorities had evacuated 800,000 people before the typhoon hit – but many died in evacuation centers, which couldn’t hold the force of the fierce winds gusting at up to 275kph (170mph) and storm surges of up to 20ft. At least 95% of the town has been destroyed, 10,000 people have been predicted dead and a lot more critically injured. On Sunday, Pope Francis issued a Twitter message urging people to follow him in prayer for victims in the mostly Catholic country, as well as leading tens of thousands of worshippers at the Vatican. Freddy smith interviews Colonel John Sanchez of the Philippines armed forces this morning ….

AUDIO INSERT: TYPHOON HAIYAN

DURATION: 0’50”

 

 

Yesterday at the Cenotaph in central London, crowds gathered in silence when Big Ben struck 11:00am.

The 2 minutes silenced was marked by a firing of the King's Troop Royal Horse Artillery, using a 13-pounder World War One gun.  When the two minutes of respectful silence was over the monarch was the first to lay her wreath at the cenotaph followed by the Duke of Cambridge, The Duke of Edinburgh and Prince Harry laid their wreaths. The Prime Minister David Cameron, Mayor Boris Johnson, Labour leader Ed Milliband and more representatives of the commonwealth countries took part in the ceremony.

DURATION : 0’30”

 

Thousands of Star Wars fans and ambitious actors from all over the country cued yesterday, for hours on end to attend the open auditions for Star Wars Episode seven. Enduring the torrential rain and cold temperatures in Bristol, nothing was holding them back to be part of this incredible opportunity. Anne Ranch caught up with a few hopefuls….

AUDIO INSERT: STAR WARS AUDITIONS

DURATION : 0’25”

 

Barclays premier league this weekend had some very tense matches, especially for Man Utd fans at Old Trafford even though  their captain Nem-an-ja Vid-ic suffered a head injury just before half time  they managed to battle through to gain a 1/0 victory against Arsenal.

DURATION: 0’13”

 

On Saturday England maintained their November winning record of 31-12 verse Argentina at Twickenham. Argentina struggled in the last quarter having careless possession and making bad decisions, causing them to walk away with empty hands from a very bustling crowd of England supporters. We caught up with a few England supporters to hear their celebrations……

AUDIO INSERT: ENGLAND VS ARGENTINA 2013

DURATION: 0’25”

 

This weekend Novac Djokovic (jo-ko-vic) retained his ATP World Finals Title beating Rafael Nadal in both sets 6-3 6-4 at the O2 Arena in London. Jo-ko-vic’s next challenge will be at Belgrade, where Serbia plays the Czech Republic in the Davis Cup final from Friday. The defeat didn’t knock Nadal’s proud sportsman-ship as we found out when Freddy Smith caught up with Nadal after the game …..

AUDIO INSERT : ATP FINAL NADAL

DURATION: 0’20”

 

Flybe are set to cut 500 jobs this year as the new boss outlines ‘s ‘shrink to grow’ strategy, in hope that it will turn around their struggling business. Even though their numbers have increased since summer , they had warned that serious cuts were going to have to be put in place in order to stop the business going bust. Anna Ranch interviewed Hammad who joined Flybe in August…..

AUDIO INSERT: FLYBE JOB CUTS

DURATION: 0’32”

 

Creamfields festival has been nominated for four categories in this year’s festival awards, this was including best major festival alongside Download, Reading and Leeds and last year's winner Bestival. The awards ceremony is being held at the Roundhouse in London on December 2nd.

DURATION: 0’8”

 

DURATION 0’03”

“Thank you for tuning in for the news at 10 with Rebecca Buckman , we will be back with more up to date news on the hour”

JINGLE OUT

2.2 FIRST DRAFT NEWS SCRIPT


Draft 1 , 2.2 News Report

 

Radio 1 Newsbeat

11/11/13

 

Yesterday at the Cenotaph in central London, crowds gathered in silence when Big Ben struck 11:00am.

The 2 minutes silenced was marked by a firing of the King's Troop Royal Horse Artillery, using a 13-pounder World War One gun.  When the two minutes of respectful silence was over the monarch was the first to lay her wreath at the cenotaph followed by the Duke of Cambridge, The Duke of Edinburgh and Prince Harry laid their wreaths. The Prime Minister David Cameron, Mayor Boris Johnson, Labour leader Ed Milliband and more representatives of the commonwealth countries took part in the ceremony.

DURATION : 0’30”

 

Thousands of Star Wars fans and ambitious actors from all over the country cued yesterday, for hours on end to attend the open auditions for Star Wars Episode VII. Enduring the torrential rain and cold temperatures in Bristol, nothing was holding them back to be part of this incredible opportunity.

DURATION : 0’14”

 

Barclays premier league this weekend had some very tense matches, especially for Man Utd fans at Old Trafford even though  their captain Nemanja Vidic suffered a head injury just before half time  they managed to battle through to gain a 1/0 victory against Arsenal.

DURATION: 0’13”

 

On Saturday England maintained their November winning record of 31-12 verse Argentina at Twickenham. Argentina struggled in the last quarter having careless possession and making bad decisions, causing them to walk away with empty hands from a very bustling crowd of England supporters.

DURATION: 0’15”

 


2.2 RADIO AND NEWS RESEARCH


These are some stories that I am considering using for my news script.
 
http://www.bbc.co.uk/newsbeat/24895182 - Miley Cyrus lights a joint on stage at the MTV EMAS

http://www.bbc.co.uk/newsbeat/19730078 - GQ 15th aniversary awards


http://www.bbc.co.uk/newsbeat/24832212 - Creamfields get nominated for four UK festival awards




http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-24887778 - remembrance sunday news





Monday, 4 November 2013

Assingment 2.1 Final Draft

For my second draft I used a BBC radio script for
mat to follow when composing the second draft.

Assigment 2.1 Radio Advertisement 1st Draft

Here is my first draft of my radio advert for Metro Radio to promote Gateshead College.

Radio Advert Script 1st draft


GIRL 1 : ‘What a mint day at college, I love going to Metro radio every Friday and seeing behind the scenes of Brian Moore’s show’

BOY 2 :   ‘ Aye , I love this place, I can’t wait till next week when we can record our own radio show!’



BOY 2  : ‘Gateshead College enterprise society Northern Stars , helped me develop my own enterprise company and gave me the opportunity to meet Peter Jones off Dragons Den!’


MAN 1: Gateshead College  is strong , creative and reliable . With hundreds of courses to suit everyone, from being a beauty therapist to a radio producer, whatever it is you will find it at Gateshead College!

WOMAN 1 :  Visit www.gateshead.ac.uk to find a course that suits you!