Monday, 25 November 2013

2.2 NEWS EVALUATION


Evaluation

The process I went through to create my radio news broadcast was to begin with , I researched the most current news on websites such as : www.bbc.co.uk/news and www.theguardian.co.uk . On these websites I picked out the most current news and to me what I thought was the most important. I picked an even amount of sport, business , political , culture and celebrity news so that my news broadcast had a wide range of variety which will suit my target audience of 16-25. The language within the script isn’t too technical so the younger ages of the listeners can relate to these articles.    
When I was constructing my first draft I based the layout on an example I had from Radio 1 Newsbeat script, this example is a conventional news script which most news broadcasters follow. On the script I noticed that they count how many seconds each news broadcast is and where you had to write down the duration. To make sure that my news script reflects my target audience I kept the news broadcasts relatively short, as younger listeners don’t normally like listening to too much talking on the radio.  When I thought I had finished my first draft, someone in my class looked over it and gave me some feedback. This is where I realised that I hadn’t written enough script for the duration to be near five minutes, I also hadn’t included any jingles or music beds which was rather important to keep my target audience interested in the news as music in the background keeps listeners focused to what news is being broadcasted, I also I hadn’t included audio notes. In order to improve my radio news script I researched how to include audio notes and music beds within my script, I found another example of a newsbeat broadcast script and followed the same layout. I found a few more news stories from my news research and added in these stories to extend my script.
To summarise my overall learning from this assignment I was surprised how simple a radio news script is, what I found difficult was making sure my news broadcast related to the right target audience. This is where I found out that adding in a music bed helped to keep the audience’s attention and also keeping the news broadcasts short but informative. What I should have done better is researched more radio news scripts as this would of helped me get the best news script to follow and therefore I wouldn’t of had to make so many changes to my first draft. From this assignment I have learnt that I should do a lot more research to improve my final draft.

1 comment:

  1. Rebecca, this is a good evaluation of your news scriptwriting assignment. You have discussed how and why you chose the stories you have included, how you have written these to appeal to your target audience, and how you have used feedback in order to improve your script. You have summarised the strengths and possible areas for development from your final script, as well as your learning from the assignment. Good work!

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